高分作文的写作形式一
0 ihunter 2010/06
高分作文的写作形式一
一、四六级写作技法和战略
1.对应法
因为四六级写作都是提要式写作,偶尔,我们可以接纳对应法依照中文提要分别写成三段。
如:96年6月份考题:
提要:1)有人以为海水是取之不尽的。(雨水、河水、井水……)
2)理想上海水是极度紧缺的。(生齿增加、产业用水增加)
3)我们应该如何办?
Global Shortage of Fresh Water
Generally, people think that fresh water is inexhaustible. Every year there is enough rain. And there is plenty of fresh water in the rivers and lakes. What’s more, we have a lot of underground water.
Actually, fresh water is in a short supply. Due to the rapid population increase, fresh water consumption remains great. Besides, with the development of industry, more water is needed. Moreover, a lot of our rivers and lakes have been so polluted that water from them is undrinkable.
We must take some measures to solve the problem of water shortage. First, population growth should be slowed down to reduce fresh water demand. Second, pollution should be controlled to purify fresh water in the rivers and lakes. What is most important, we should cherish every drip of water in our daily life.
再如:95年1月份试题:
提要:1)有人以为钱是幸福之本(source of happiness)
2)有人以为款项是万恶之源(root of evil)
3)我的不雅观点。
Some think that money is the source of happiness. Once they have money, they will enjoy everything. They can use the money they have to buy, a beautiful house or even a wife.
Some others think that money is the root of all evil. Due to the greed for money, people will do various kinds of evil things, such as stealing, robbing or even murder. Money can easily change a kind, honest man into a cruel, cunning woe.
In my opinion, both of the above-mentioned viewpoints go to an extreme. Money itself is neither good nor evil. It all depends on how we look at it. We can not deny the importance of money in the modern society. Meanwhile, we should not ignore the fact that something can not be bought by money, such as friendship, true love and so on.
这两例都是接纳了对应写作体例,将提醒中的三句分别扩展成三段,三段之间相互衔接,组成一个完整的篇章。
2.调解法
虽然是提要式写作,提要所提醒的只是文章所要包括的重要内容,却不是文章的构造形式,通俗情况下,同学们应根据英语文章的范例,从头安排文章。如下面有关“钱”的一个写作,依照英语的表达习尚,最好是加上一个引子。
What is money? To this question, different people hold differently. Some thing money is the source of happiness, while some regard it as the root of all evils. As far as I am concerned, they both have their reasons
Those who consider money as the source of happiness argue that money means massive house, beautiful clothes, or luxurious cars, and can enable them and their families live comfortably. They even believe that money can bring power, friendship, and love. But due to the temptation of money, there are many people who become thieves, robbers, or murderers. It is also out of the greed for money that some officials forget their duty and cause enormous losses to the country, so some people think that money is the root of all evil and suggest that we keep away from money.In fact, money is merely a medium of exchange. It may bring you happiness; it may lead you to a life of crime. Whether it is good or bad depends on how it is used.
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