考生必看托福作文罕见的23种错误
关于TOEFL测验作文相信巨匠都买了不少参考书，并且背诵了不少好段子，可是有的考生仍旧作文不理想，究其缘故原因在写作时年夜概不太在意，好了，让我们看看专家如何评点TOEFL测验作文的罕见错误的……
1.构造不平行例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.当利用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，该当利用词性相通或统一范例的短语。
2.不知所云例：Many companies began using computers mouth。
3.段落过长，不分段主语与动词同等题目：She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主语和动词在数方面不合等。
4.句子别扭：We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.说话过长或不清。换言之，句子显得风趣好笑。
5.不要利用缩写在正式的写作中不要利用缩写形式(can’t，don't，it's，we'll，they've等等)，而该当利用单词的完整形式(cannot，do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。
6.联系干系词语频频：Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在该句的重要主语和重要动词前利用连词。
7.句子不完整：Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to getsintoscollege. For example, my friend in high school.句子没有重要主语或重要动词，因为实在它应是一个从句。这是一个非经罕见的错误，点窜的体例是将两个句子连接起来。
8.不要利用get When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and gotsintosbed. Get太不正式，意思也过于迷糊，不合适用在正式的场所。应将get改为一个更加详细的单词，如become, receive, find, achieve,等等。
9.誊写难以识别信息不准确：I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.传的信息不准确，大概让人听起来以为年夜概不准确(如果确实是准确的，该当注释为什么如许，因为读者不以为是准确的)。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百；我们不能尽对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。为保险起见，该当利用many或most。非英语单词Computers are very helpful and advantageable.虽然看起来象个单词，实在不是，至少不是个英文单词。利用这个单词的另一种形式。
10.介词多余：I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在默示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况罕见于downtown，home，there，here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词，因此不能在它们背面添加介词。
11.跑题或不相干：There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.这个意思与文章的主题有关。
12.陈词流言：It is okay for children to fail sometimes.所表达的意思很通俗年夜年夜都人都已经晓得到了，因此就没有需要再说出来。
13.标点题目：I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.这是一个极度遍及的题目！良多门生在句子中利用了太多的句号，尤其是当他们用手写的时候。
14.频频冗余：Personally, I believe what the newsIT prints.一种意思的表述不止一次，大概某个词语不需要。
15.双数/双数：Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.单词需要从双数变为双数，大概由双数变成双数。双数可数名词双数可数名词不能零丁利用，应该将其变为双数形式大概加下限制词(a, the, my, his, her, Gary's, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。
16.拼写错误主语、动词或宾语有题目：I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的根基构造有题目：缺少主语、动词或宾语，大概这些身分频频。
17.语气与文章不符：I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.语气与文章其他部分不符合年夜概是过于正式大概太不正式。
18.代词指代不明：If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.代词所指代的指示词(介词所替代的名词)不清晰。
19.过于笼统：We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.句子或它所表达的意思过于笼统，不能供给多少信息。
20.动词时态错误：Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.动词时态不准确查抄一下是应该用现在时、过往时、将来时照旧完成时等等。
21.选词不得当：I was late getting home because I lost my way.在这种情况下不该该利用该词可选择更好的词语大概所利用的词语与文章的总体语气不符。
22.单词形式不当：I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.所利用的单词的形式不准确查抄一下应该利用该词的名词、描述词或副词形式的哪一种。
23.用词错误：Even I don’t speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation.用词错误或在此种情况下该词不是最佳用词。