四六级测验作文写作考前指导
四级和六级测验写作固然已经接纳相通的命题，可是评分却有差异。在写作测试和教学中，考生和西席都应该灵敏地掌握这些差异。详细地讲，语汇、语型、句法和章法构造多个方面在深度和准确程度上有差异。
理想上不合的测验利用相通大概类似的命题，在外洋测试中屡见不鲜。托福和雅思，GMAT和GRE命题良多时候是相通的。可是测验的评分重点有很年夜的不合。
写四级作文，考生应该留意不要跨越四级测验的词汇范围。句法构造要有得当的转变，可是不要利用过于庞大的从句。不然，错误的庞大句子远远不如准确的简朴的句子。
我们用一道详细的题目申明四级和六级的差异。
例题：1998年1月
PartⅤ Writing (30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the marketing Harmfulness of Fake Commodities. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1.现在社会上有不少冒充伪劣商品(fake commodities)。为什么会有这种现象?
2.举例申明冒充伪劣商品对消耗者团体、社会等的危害。
Harmfulness of Fake Commodities
范文一
Each individual encounters such troubles as sickness and discomfort situations in his or her development. Similarly, each society is inevitably harmfully impacted by immoral or even illegal economic activities in the process of its evolvement. The most notorious and harmful among these despicable actives are fake commodities.
Fake commodities, like a virus that intrudes and cripples an organism, exert alarmingly detrimental influences on each individual consumer, the community, and the social mores as well.
They directly hurt the consumers by providing products that are priced highly but inferior in quality. Sometimes such products as faked medicine or foods can threaten consumers’ life, needless to mention consumers’ economic loss. The more fake commodities a society has, the more exacerbated the moral and ethic in that society.
What the society must immediately address is to minimize the quantity of any fake commodities and eradicate any opportunity to manufacture them. 146 words留意现在的作文要求字数增加到了200字阁下。
讲评：
1.类比性思想和写作伎俩处理笼统庞大的命题
2.比较构造的句型写作练习
3.主语从句为代表的庞大句法构造
4.定语从句的练习
范文二 204单词
Economic boom should bring people a more comfortable and convenient life. Ironically, the more commodities available in a society whose economic fabric is not woven by legal and moral warp and woof , the less and less security the average consumers can have. In fact, even today the public is still jeopardized by fake commodities that flood almost each developing country.Fake commodities directly harm the average individual consumers in a series of ways. First they are usually inferior in quality and thus cannot meet consumers’ ends. Take a fake watch as an example, it is sold at the same price as is the genuine one but seldom can it give time precisely. Secondly, they might threaten consumers’ health and life in case of fake foods, medicine, and beverages. Some patients are seriously endangered by taking fake medicines. Some even lose their life immediately after eating fake soybean sauces and vinegar. The society as a whole is also detrimentally infected by fake commodities as far as the moral and ethic is concerned.Then, how to address this serious problem? Most vital is to legally penalize those who manufacture and trade fake products. Second is to educate people how to tell the facts and fiction.以上两篇作文都是极度精良的。从用词到句型的转变，章法的合理安排等各个方面都已经逾越了一个考生可以掌握的程度。所以，纯真从四六级测验来看，都不是合适门生的作文。那么思量到考生的理想英语程度。我们供给一下两种写法。
毕竟什么才是精良的四级作文呢？这个说法正本就比较抵牾。因为四级测验自己便是要求比较低的英文。若安在低条理获得“精良”实在不是一件随便的事变。
申明：
1.现在社会上有不少冒充伪劣商品(fake commodities)。为什么会有这种现象?
2.举例申明冒充伪劣商品对消耗者团体、社会等的危害。
这个考题要求考生
#61548;描绘社会上有不少冒充伪劣的商品
#61548;申明社会现象存在的缘故原因
#61548;利害陈说
这是四级和六级共同要求的说话功用，这两种测验都要求考生严酷依照命题的提要写作。所以三个段落的分别就非常清晰。
范文三 （四级）
190 words
The society has hundreds and thousands of fake commodities. They are almost everywhere. They are in daily life, hospital, supermarkets, and so on.
Why do we have these fake commodities? This question has not only attracted the interests from the scientists but also from the general public. Generally three reasons have been given to explain this phenomenon. First of all, fake commodities are usually profitable. They are lower in cost and of course, in quality, but are high in price. Secondly, the society often finds it hard to help consumers to tell fake ones from the genuine goods. Third, legal restrictions against fake commodities are not work at all or work with lower efficiency.Fake commodities do harm to the human life. They can damage the life or ruin one’s happiness, depending on what kind of fake commodities consumers have bought. They can also damage the society as a whole if the fake commodities are not restricted by governments or other agencies. Fake medicines are a typical example. Today, even in the field of academic, fake ITs are not uncommon. All these fake commodities exert negative impacts on human civilization.范文四 （六级）： 258 wordsFake commodities seem to flood into each corner of daily life. Worse they even stream into academic institutions evidenced by the fact that some professors plagiarize ITs. We have fake clothes with brand name. We have fake medicines which are openly sold in hospitals. We also have some fake computers and TV sets. In one word, fake commodities are almost everywhere.Then we naturally ask: Why do fake commodities flow into the supermarkets? The flood is so overwhelming that both the sociologists and the general public have to dig the root reasons. On the basis of scientific research and survey, scholars discover that among the diverse array of contributing factors, the major one is that the society in which the fake commodities are flooding is usually short of an effective legal system to control or guide the markets. Another reason, similarly vital, states that the social and economic order is maintained by, to a considerable extent, ethic and moral. But the moral and value system becomes fragile when subject to a market characterized and dominated by the cold cash. Economic models have been put forward to provide theories to account fro why fake commodities can negative influence a society to such an extent. Of courses many other reasons also play their roles.The harmful impacts exerted by fake commodities on the social and economic development can be alarmingly destructive. Not only can they directly harm the consumers’ benefits and rights but also they collapse a civilization provided that the government has no effective measures to address this problem.考生可以比较四级和六级测验的两篇范文的重要区别。在逻辑申明题目组成的缘故原因时，也便是文章的中心主题段落，四级考生只需用根基的句型表达清晰就可以了。而六级的要求则遍及偏高。考生必需从表层深入，乃至时习以为常的社会糊口现象挖掘出深层的素质缘故原因。在范文四，我从社会的法则和社会次序的维系主体立义。
从思想高度上，如果说六级要求高。那么在表达的体例上，六级利用的句子长度和难度都比较高。好比在范文四中最长的句子可以高达46个单词。而在四级中则没有这种庞大多变的句子。另有一个题目需要提醒考生，六级作文清楚表现出从句多，条理干系庞大。
以上的作文理想上都到达了满分的要求。四六级测验即将到临，预祝考生获得应试乐成。
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