新航道名师亲历3.10新托福点评写作
0 ihunter 2010/06
新航道名师亲历3.10新托福点评写作
经历了数日的雾霾笼盖后,3月10号的北京气候格外好,微弱的北风将天空吹得锃明瓦亮。“希看本日命运会不错!”我如许祝愿着自己和其他“同福”们。
写作
白话部分很快结束,接上去的是末了一项-写作部分。
第一部分综合写作要求归结综合听力材料辩驳阅读材料中关于电子眼(speed camera)感化的不雅观点。阅读材料以为Speed Camera有如下感化:1。Warning people to drive more safely; 2. Freeing police force patrolling the highway so that they can do other work; 3 Making courts’ decision on ticket disputes more easily so as to relieve court congestion.听力材料中的Lecturer逐条辩驳了上述不雅观点。
点评:此题中的读、听材料都接纳分条论述体例,条理性较强,破、立点对应干系明白。但要留意不要纯真归结综合Lecture要点,还要申明息争释它是若何质疑和辩驳阅读材料里的不雅观点的。如Lecture的第一点是:电子眼的出现会使某些司机玩“老鼠逗猫”的游戏,即只在电子眼附近加速,在两个电子眼之间的路段就超速。但仅归结综合这些内容还不敷,还要继承申明上述不雅观点若何无力地质疑了阅读材料中关于电子眼可以敦促司机平安驾驶的不雅观点。
自力写作部分要求讨论一个教诲题目:Is it more important for a teacher to help students gain self-confidence or to teach them specific knowledge?题目仍要求Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
点评:这是一道不雅观点比较题,因此既要“论”,又要“比”:即如果选A,不但要论述A的重要,还要申明为什么A比B重要。我选择了:帮门生获得自大更重要。来由列了两条:
第一条:A student with high-level self-confidence will study specific knowledge more actively, more wisely and more efficiently. On the contrary, one can hardly find a person who succeeds in a task when he doubts his or her ability.
第二条理由:One may forget most of his or her specific knowledge taught at school, but a trait such as self-confidence formed during the school age may affect and benefit him for his whole life. A teacher is just in the best position to help those young people develop such invaluable traits…….
两篇文章都定时完成,缺乏的是第二篇余下的查抄时候太少,只要两分钟。写作文时本想拿失落耳机,但刚一取下,只听得满屋的敲键声,索性戴着耳机写到了末了。
总结
在Listening、Speaking和Writing三部分,我对其中的听力材料都担当做了条记。不合的是,Listening Section的条记注意部分要点和细节;而Speaking Section和 Writing Section的条记则偏重于材料不雅观点的记实和拾掇整顿。
9点钟,测验结束。在确认本次测验有效后,看着年夜部分还在重要答题的同学们,我长舒了一口吻。走出耕作楼,呼吸着夜晚的奇怪空气,回看身后灯火透明的教学楼,我心中默念:Good Luck,Every TOEFLER!
关键字:新托福 新托福报名 新托福测验 新托福听力 新托福测验报名
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