高分作文的写作形式三
例文
题目：How to Achieve Success
提要：1）有人说乐成重要靠命运；
2）有人则以为乐成重要靠勤奋，与命运毫无干系；
3）我的不雅观点
Some people say the key to success is the luck， while others claim it is hard work. As far as I am concerned， there are many factors contributing to success and the three fundamental ones are diligence， devotion and perseverance.
Diligence is the first key factor to success. Diligence helps us remove ignorance， overcome difficulties， and enlighten our minds. It makes a fool wise， and a poor man rich. Devotion is another factor to success. Whatever we do， we must love it and do it whole-heartedly. Only when we set our minds on the job， can we do it well. Furthermore， perseverance， or a strong will， is the last key to success. Without a strong will， we are likely to give up when we meet some difficulties， let alone perform wonderful deeds.To conclude， all great men achieve success through diligence， devotion and perseverance. Just as the famous saying goes，“No pains， no gains”，“Where there is a will， there is a way.”谋篇结构（4）将提醒中的第一句做为第一段主题句，然后拓展开将提醒的第二句做为第二段的主题句，拓展申明将提醒的第三句拓展成第三段，但留意与下面两段的照应，使其有总揽全文的感化例文题目：On Housing Reform提醒：1）旧衡宇政策的弊端；2）房改带来的利益；3）我如何办？
The old house-allotting policy had at least two disadvantages. First， the government spent a lot of money building some houses， but these houses were allotted to people free of charge. Thus， the government would have no money to build more houses for people who badly needed them. Second， the persons who were in power could get more houses than those who were powerless. This was quite unfair.On the contrary， the new system of house allotment may bring about many new things. For example， the government will have more money which can be used in house construction. So， the housing industry can develop more quickly. Besides， because houses will be sold to people， the chances they get will be equal.When I enter the society， I would get a loan from the bank to buy my own house. Then， I would try to pay back the loan in the shortest time possible. After that， I would proudly claim：“Now， I am the master of that house.”谋篇结构（5）将提醒中的第一句作为文章的第一段，并提主题；举例申明自己的不雅观点；结论重述主题例文题目：On Punctuality提醒：1）定时在现代糊口中仍旧很重要；2）试举例申明In our modern life， punctuality is one of the most important qualities that any person should possess. Punctuality demonstrates that you are reliable and can be trusted with responsibilities. Besides， it can make a person a good man. And if you are not punctual， you may injure others.We should practice punctuality for the sake of others， as well as ourselves. He who is punctual will accomplish far more in a day than he who is not so. Washington was remarkable for this virtue. His mother had taught him， when a boy， or have certain hours for every employment， and to do everything at the appointed time. This habit helped， in his later life， to make him a good man. Without it， he could never have made such success.Neglect of punctuality may injure both to others and to oneself. An applicant may be turned away just for the sake of being late for the interview. Students coming late for class will undoubtedly interrupt the teacher. Therefore， we ought never to say“It is only once—— I will not do so again” to excuse ourselves； otherwise we will be tardier and we will fail in our society.In a word， if we form the habit of punctuality at school， it will be of great advantage to us in our future life.
关键字：高分作文 高考高分作文 中考高分作文 近两年中考高分作文 2008高考高分作文