作文中如何使句子多样化?
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ihunter
2010/06
一篇好文章的前提良多。除了内容丰硕和构造慎密之外,词汇的运用和句子的处理,也起着决议性感化。
句子可长可短,统一件事,可以用不合的句式表达。如果句子清一色是简朴句,文章肯定很单调风趣。如果全篇充满了冗长的庞大句,读起来也很艰苦。最好的体例因此简朴句为基础,共同得当的并列句和庞大句。简朴句可长可短,每每要加些隶属身分,如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词短语,以及节缩身分。
总之,作者可根据情况,使句子多样化,使文章灵活多姿。例如下列五个句子的根基不雅观点一样,可是句式不合,内容重点也有些差异:
(1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句(1)+2)
(2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (现在分语短语+简朴句)
(3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副词短语+并列分句(1)-(2) )
(4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (简朴句+描述语短语)
(5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (缘故原因副词从句+主句)
(1)和(5)的句式最罕见;如果加上其他三种相互交替,句子不是更多样化吗?
末了,看看这两个句子要若何多样化呢?
(6) The young pilot was on his first overseas training.
(7) He felt very uneasy.
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(a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy.
(b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training.
(c) The young pilot’s first overseas training made him feel very uneasy.
(d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.
(e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy.
(f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.
(g) Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.
(h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy.
(i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy.
(j) When the young pilot was on his/first overseas trainging, he felt very uneasy.
(k) As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.
(l) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy.
在上述12个句子中,(a)-(g)是简朴句;(h)是并列句;(i)-(l)是庞大句。简朴句除(b)和(g)之外,其他五样,用的人并不多。人们最喜好接纳庞大句,尤其是(j)和(k)这两款;接着便是并列句(h)。如果年夜年夜都人的句子只限于(b),(g), (h), (j)和(k)这五种,而其他的则弃如敝屣,不是很惋惜吗?
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