让英语写作中的文章句式多样化
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ihunter
2010/06
让英语写作中的文章句式多样化
句式便是句子的构造体例,也便是句子的模样形状或格式。不合的思惟内容要用不合的句式来表达;而统一思惟内容也可以用不合的句式来表达。句式不合,表达结果也就不合。只要句式多样化,文章才会活泼风趣,充满生机。可是,在理想写作中,初学写作的门生频频一篇文章都是陈腐不雅观点的简朴句,文章单调风趣,毫无气愤。笔者以为,得当地利用某些体例或手腕有助于理想表达形式的多样化,增强表达结果。兹将常用体例简朴介绍如下。
句式便是句子的构造体例,也便是句子的模样形状或格式。不合的思惟内容要用不合的句式来表达;而统一思惟内容也可以用不合的句式来表达。句式不合,表达结果也就不合。只要句式多样化,文章才会活泼风趣,充满生机。可是,在理想写作中,初学写作的门生频频一篇文章都是陈腐不雅观点的简朴句,文章单调风趣,毫无气愤。笔者以为,得当地利用某些体例或手腕有助于理想表达形式的多样化,增强表达结果。兹将常用体例简朴介绍如下。
一、窜改句子开头
良多门生在写作中偏向于用与人有干系的词性,用名词和代词作为句子的开头,如 People,We,I,He,They,She等。但这种开头见多了,难免让人厌倦。试比较:
A.People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food.
B.There is a great demand across the country for all kinds of nutritious food.
第一句改用非人称名词作为主语开头,第二句则用there+be句型开头。如许既窜改了主语+谓语+宾语单调句型,又把想夸张的意思凸起出来。理想上,为了把文章写得活泼活泼,除了用主语开头外,还可以用句子的其他身分开头。
1.用副词开头
Too often,students stray into the habit of cheating on tests.
2.用同位语开头
Air,water and oxygen,everything that is necessary for life.
3.用状语开头
Dark and empty,the house looked very different from the way I remembered it.
4.用表语开头
Equally essential to the highest success in learning a language are intense interest plus persistent effort.
5.用宾语开头
My advice you would not listen to;my helps you laughed at.Now you will have what you asked for.
6.以短语润色语开头
1)以介词短语开头
To me the news was very interesting,but to my wife very boring.
2)以分词短语开头
Disturbed by the discord of American life in recent decades,Menchester took flight for the pacific islands
3)以不定式短语开头
To pass the exam,you should work very hard.
二、巧用连接词
有的门生在作文中利用过多简朴句,成了简朴句堆砌;有的写庞大句时,动辄用so, and,then,but,or,however,yet等非但达不到丰硕表达体例的目标,反而使句子构造松散、机器。为了防止这种现象,可以经由历程利用连接词,尤其是一些默示隶属干系的连接词,如 who,which,that,because,since,although,after,as,before,when,whenever,if, unless,as if等,不但可以丰硕句型,并且还可以把思惟表达得更清晰,意义更连接。例如:Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact.这段笔墨用简朴句表达,它们之间内涵的逻辑干系迷糊不清,意思支离破裂。如果利用连接词,将单句与其前后归并,组成主次干系,就把一个比较庞大的内容和干系表达得条理清晰、构造严谨。例如:It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future,though it is unlikely to be true.再如:The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world,and in spring time it often overflows its banks,and the lives of many people are endangered.此句用and把三个分句不断究竟,既风趣又好笑。如果利用了干系代词which,语义就会更连接,说话也会更流畅:The Mississippi River,which is one of the longest rivers in the world,often overflows its banks in the spring time,endangering the lives of many people.三、长短句交插长句和短句是就句子的字数多少、形体长短而言的。长句和短句各有其利益和错误错误。长句,因为利用的定语、状语较多,限制了不雅观点的内涵,增年夜了不雅观点的内涵,所以比较精确、细密,但利用起来不敷活泼简练。短句,因为字数少,直截了当,通俗比较简练、明快、无力,但倒运于表达庞大的语义内容。在详细说话活动中,最好长短句交替利用。这既表现了节奏上的要求,也是意义上的需要。例如:(1)We can imagine the beautiful surroundings.(2)There are many trees along the streets.(3)There is a clean river in the city.(4) There are many fishes in the river.(5)There are willow trees on the one side.(6)There are some pieces of grassland on the other side.(7)There are many flowers on them.文中七个句子都是简朴句,句型构造单一,并且句子长短统一,都在七、八词阁下,非常单调。下面是点窜后的段落:(1)Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we make our cities greener.(2)Green trees line the streets.(3)A clean river winds through the city,in which a lot of fishes abound.(4)On the one side stand rows of willow trees.(5)On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers.改写后的这段笔墨,有长句(1)、(3)、(5),也有短句(2)和(4),一长一短,顿挫顿挫的节奏感就出来了。不但句子长短交插,并且句型构造转变也很年夜,使文章流畅天然,活泼活泼。
关键字:英语句式 英语根基句式 英语常用句式 英语经典句式 高考英语作词句式
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